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Oh Great. After long time you put such a nice text here. I thought you want to take a TOEFL exam. But I think two items are same between IELTS and TOEFL. Number of words and the structure. Let’s do some corrections: Human being lives with its society Well, I didn’t get it. Human is woman, man and child. Also, live with s.o means to share your house with someone and have relationship with her/him (even they haven’t gotten married) importance of appearance is highlighted is societies. The importance of appearance is highlighted in societies. This argue will focus on just beauty of appearance, because it is more general than the first category. It’s your opinion ,then it’s better to say In my opinion…… Appearance has some critical effects on (self) confidence, social position, finding new friends and communication. In the past, facilities for being beauty were little and unavailable for all of people in society. Beauty of beautiful Were slight ( maybe it can be better than little) ;) In the past--à you use it two times. In second time you can say, before or other word which you know Their information about science of surgery and other useful thing for being beauty( beauty or beautiful,, which one) were low. You can change this sentence and express it in other way. So we have more people which they want to make themselves the beauty than past decays. So we have more people which(who) they want to make themselves the beauty(beautiful) than past decays. If I wanted to write this sentence I would write: A number of people who want to be beautiful is more than before. Holistically, it believed that, with growing the knowledge about this matter through the time. Do you have any reason to write this sentence as a result?!! You said truly. Nowadays being beautiful ( not tidy) is so important, but in my opinion it was better to say although majority of people think it’s good but I don’t think it can play an important role in our life. For example you could start like this: At first glance, appearance plays an important role in people life but when we look at this issue deeply we will understand there are many points in our life that beautiful is less important. Also you could mention that beauty can be important for some jobs and so on Yours

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این کار نشدنیه .... شرمنده که صریح گفتم .... من تا الان تو این سایت حداقل کسی رو ندیدم که موضوع زبان خوندن براش جدی باشه که بخواد این وقت رو بذاره به هرحال ممکنه تو کوتاه مدت جواب بده... چون بعد از نهایت دو هفته همه یادشون میره که دو هفته پیش میخواستن زبان رو تقویت کنند .... با تشکر

سلام باتشکر از شما این گروه رو شما میخواید تشکیل بدید یا اینکه گروهی هست که از طرف سایت اپلای ابرود درست شده و ادمین اون سایت هم مهرداد هست چون آیدی arash.241 به نام مهرداد هست! اگه اینطوره، بهتر نیست یه گروهی از بچه های همین سایت تشکیل داده بشه.

سلام secret عزیز خوشحال میشم این جزوه رو داشته باشم و با دوستان در این زمینه تمرین کنم موفق باشید

Hi Sharook I found out you study English in advance level, why you chose basic then you wrote perfectly, I liked it You are getting improvement let's do some corrections some times I feel some body or some thing bother me Sometimes, I feel somebody or something bother me look these words up in your English-English dictionary Really there is difference between sometimes and some times when every things are black When everything is black when I feel some love at end of my heart When I feel some love at bottom of my heart it floating in my body It is floating in my body and make me to tolerate it and some times like it and make me to tolerate it and sometimes like it :w16:Good JOB

It's not easy to explain your feelings in other language I don't know maybe it's difficult for me Every thing could be better

stay up get up I ''stayed up'' late last night and ''got up'' at 12 p.m دیشب تا دیر وقت بیدار بودم و ساعت 12 از خواب بلند شدم

slip out I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to say that. It just slipped out متاسفم. قصدم این نبود که اون حرفو بزنم. یهو از دهنم پرید

let down Never let down your friends هیچوقت دوستانت رو ناامید نکن

you make me sick حالمو به هم میزنی dig in بزن تو رگ alas for you وای به حالت

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That was great I specially agree with the part of your words about limitation and selfish, It doesn't mean that you love some body. and as I 'm telling majority of people confused between like and love. Sometimes we like some body and we make mistake between it and love. although I think it's not easy to find a true love at first, all of us will say, Yeah, I don't like to bother you, You are free and just let me love you and some thing like that. but after short time every thing will change and this short time depends on your dependence to LOVER If I could select between love and like, I prefer to live with liking others I look froward to hearing about others' idea

Mountain Story A son and his father were walking on the mountains. Suddenly, his son falls, hurts himself and screams: "AAAhhhhhhhhhhh!!!" To his surprise, he hears the voice repeating, somewhere in the mountain: "AAAhhhhhhhhhhh!!!" Curious, he yells: "Who are you?" He receives the answer: "Who are you?" And then he screams to the mountain: "I admire you!" The voice answers: "I admire you!" Angered at the response, he screams: "Coward!" He receives the answer: "Coward!" He looks to his father and asks: "What's going on?" The father smiles and says: "My son, pay attention." Again the man screams: "You are a champion!" The voice answers: "You are a champion!" The boy is surprised, but does not understand. Then the father explains: "People call this ECHO, but really this is LIFE. It gives you back everything you say or do. Our life is simply a reflection of our actions. If you want more love in the world, create more love in your heart. If you want more competence in your team, improve your competence. This relationship applies to everything, in all aspects of life; Life will give you back everything you have given to it." YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU

“Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury’s circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper Price is one of the most important objects that majority of human being pay attention to that, but it is not the thorough aspect. Sometimes we prefer to have an expensive instrument but with high quality. Since the price for the Burgle has been decreased, The Mercury’s circulation has been getting decreased. In this arguement there is no convincing reason that imply price plays an important role in competition Between The Burgle and The Mercury. Five years is a long time that many items could be affected in purchasing of newspaper. For instance, Burgle has added some parts in newspaper that has distinctive readers for them. in addition, putting the newest news would be interested for some people. In this argument, there is no persuading reason that shows decreasing in The Mercury’s circulation related to lower price of The Burgle. We can mention, changing the price and allocating some space for advertisements that would be attractive for readers and putting the newest information about different parts of life for instance, economics, sports, society, etc could be beneficial for The Mercury.

Dear Pianist as you observe, Dear Sindokht corrected your text perfectly Just I want to mention 2 things try to avoid misspelling Tank you.... Thank you The other one is about may be/maybe The simplest explanation is Maybe = perhaps May be = is possibly nice move

دوست عزیز شما نکاتی که از نظر خودتون میتونه مهم باشه رو قرار بدید دوستانی هم که سوال داشته باشند حتما از شما خواهند پرسید

منظم مهربون یه مدت یادم هست آواتارش عکس لاک پشت بود!!! شاید صبر و حوصله لاک پشت رو دوست داشت باوفا ....

Dear Sindokht I appreciate you to spend your time to correct my essay this argument is not convincing ..... it's a sentence that GMAT Exam , mentions it to use, and It means It can be correct and about not only It's common to use it not only.... but also I should say, the sentence after them should be same

The following appeared in a report presented for discussion at a meeting of the directors of a company that manufactures parts for heavy machinery: “The falling revenues that the company is experiencing coincide with delays in manufacturing. These delays, in turn, are due in large part to poor planning in purchasing metals. Consider further that the manager of the department that handles purchasing of raw materials has an excellent background in general business, psychology, and sociology, but knows little about the properties of metals. The company should, therefore, move the purchasing manager to the sales department and bring in a scientist from the research division to be manager of the purchasing department.” Having a perfect sense about business and marketing for a purchasing manager is extremely important. In fact, purchasing manager not only should be aware about time to buy raw material for manufacture that he/she works but also should be a psychologist in his/her major. The argument is not logically convincing that the most problem has been caused due to the purchasing manager. Manufacture has a delay to deliver products for customers, and there are different reasons that can be yield these dilemmas. For instance, number of employees, division of job between employees, lack of coherent plans, etc. In this argument, the purchase manager is aware about general business, and it means he/she can be qualified for this position. Although having a professional knowledge about the material that they work in that field would be a positive point, but it will not be sufficient. Delay to buy raw materials for manufacture is the mistake of purchasing manager, but it doesn’t mean that all of firm’s problems are because of that. Substituting the manager and choosing the other one, could not be the best solution. One of the most important points of a current purchasing manager is his or her awareness about marketing. Changing him/her is not a rational reason for manufacture.

دستت درد نکنه مال کشورهای دیگه هم زمان خاصی داره مثلا ایران میگه از ساعت 9 تا 12 میتونید خرید و فروش کنید حالا برای کشورهای دیگه که زمانشون با هم دیگه نمیخونه، چی؟ به وقت محلی همون کشوره؟؟

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