my writing _ pianist

[pianist 31129]

...hi friends

 

i decided to write my text in this topic and i hope it make a opportunity to learning more about writing technique

...i ask you to help me in this goal

 

...tanks alot

[H O P E 34652]

...hi friends

 

i decided to write my text in this topic and i hope it make a opportunity to learning more about writing technique

...i ask you to help me in this goal

 

...tanks alot

hi , and congratulations because of this great decision

am I allowed to talk about your grammatical mistakes?

 

I think you should say

:

 

i decided to write my texts in this topic and i hope this give me an opportunity ( a chance ) to learn more about writing techniques

(...i ask you to help me get into this goal ( or you can say : i ask you to help me make this work

 

 

[pianist 31129]

ok tnx hasti

 

when i was in high school i went to english class in academy english for 4 term,this term is very short to learning but it is enough me to interest English Lanquage but unfortuntlay i cant continie this.

but this liking could be facilitate exam in high school and i can pass exam with a short reading in my book... but my friend allwas be fear about exam... any way English is a Forgetable language like other and if we not continuator exercise we drop exteremely.

 

 

 

 

[H O P E 34652]

ok tnx hasti

 

when i was in high school i went to english class in academy english for 4 term,this term is very short to learning but it is enough me to interest English Lanquage but unfortuntlay i cant continie this.

but this liking could be facilitate exam in high school and i can pass exam with a short reading in my book... but my friend allwas be fear about exam... any way English is a Forgetable language like other and if we not continuator exercise we drop exteremely.

 

first of all ; I'm not hasti

 

second :

it's better to say :

 

when i was at high school i went to English class at English academy for 4 terms ,it was too short for learning ( or to learn ) but it was enough for me to become interested in English but unfortunately i couldn't continue it

but this (interest) made exams easier for me at high school and i could pass them with a short review on my book... but my friends were always afraid of it... any way English is a Forgotable language like others and if we don't exercise , we 'll drop extremely (sharply

 

bold ones are gramatical mistakes and red ones are about your dictation

i enjoyed reading it , it was cute and sincerely

 

 

the dictation of forgotable is also wrong but i don't remember the correct form right now .

[pianist 31129]

excuse me

:5c6ipag2mnshmsf5ju3... tank you dear faeze

 

 

!i want to speak about life

...life is a exotic thing

life means competition and if you be clever you can a winner otherwise loser! it is not depend on you are a good person or not. i don,t know , :hanghead:may be i'm mistake but if you see to your milieu confirm me

who that a voluble is belove and who not is unknown altought a honestly

 

it is better to finish

:icon_pf (34):...i was say jive

[سیندخت 18786]

excuse me :5c6ipag2mnshmsf5ju3... tank you dear faeze

!i want to speak about life...life is

an

exotic thing life means competition and if you

are

clever you can

be

a winner otherwise loser! it

does

not depend

on the fact that

you are a good person or not. i don,t know , :hanghead:may be I

make a

mistake but if you

look at

your milieu.

you'll

confirm me

the voluble person

is

loveable

and

other one

is

unknown

despite his honest

it is better to finish:icon_pf (34):...i

sayed

jive

 

hi

how are U doing?

:ws37:I figure out the points which I highlited in to red

and

 

also I agree with the means of your paragraph

 

good luck:icon_gol:

[Eng HVAC 4139]

 

excuse me

:5c6ipag2mnshmsf5ju3... tank you dear faeze

!i want to speak about life

...life is a exotic thing

life means competition and if you be clever you can a winner otherwise loser! it is not depend on you are a good person or not. i don,t know , :hanghead:may be i'm mistake but if you see to your milieu confirm me

who that a voluble is belove and who not is unknown altought a honestly

 

it is better to finish

:icon_pf (34):...i was say jive

 

 

hi

how are U doing?

:ws37:I figure out the points which I highlited in to red

and

 

also I agree with the means of your paragraph

 

good luck:icon_gol:

 

Dear Pianist

as you observe, Dear Sindokht corrected your text perfectly

Just I want to mention 2 things

try to avoid misspelling

Tank you.... Thank you

 

The other one is about may be/maybe

The simplest explanation is

Maybe = perhaps

May be = is possibly

 

nice move

 

[H O P E 34652]

 

i said jive

I agree with the meaning of your paragraph

 

I'll be happy if you mention my mistakes too