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Hello my dears friend

 

When I saw hossein،s topic I asked him about writting but I don not have high self confidence to write but he told me just start writting our friends will be come and check your writting and of course correct it

 

He helps me alot

 

from here I should say that: my best friend thank you for helping and giving self confidence to me

 

I،m waiting for your suggestion:icon_gol:

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Hello my dears friend

 

When I saw hossein،s topic I asked him about writting but I don not have high self confidence to write but he told me just start writting our friends will be come and check your writting and of course correct it

 

He helps me alot

 

from here I should say that: my best friend thank you for helping and giving self confidence to me

 

I،m waiting for your suggestionicon_gol.gif:icon_gol:

 

Dear Sharook

your writing is extremely nice, and also I am glad when I see educated people are interested in learning English

I don't know that you put these sentences to correct them or not

by the way, I want to suggest you to have a perfect essay

 

 

Hello my dears friend

Hello my dear friends

 

When I saw hossein،s topic I asked him about writting

when I saw hossein's topic for writing , I asked him about that. or also you can say :: I asked him how he did it

 

but I don not have high self confidence to write

but my self-confidence is not high to write English essay

 

he told me just start writting

he told me just start doing that

 

 

our friends will be come and check your writting and of course correct it

our friends will come here and check your writing and of course correct your mistakes

 

he helps me alot

he helps me a lot ( be careful we don't have alot in English

 

from here I should say that: my best friend thank you for helping and giving self confidence to me

Thank you in advance to help me in this way

 

I،m waiting for your suggestion

I look forward to hearing you about my essay

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some times I feel some body or some thing bother me

like a pain in my neck

what should I do

when I feel all the people are unreliable

when every things are black

when all my friends leave me

when I feel some love at end of my heart

but I don,t want it

it floating in my body

and make me to tolerate it and some times like it

 

I am waiting for the biggest change in my life

:icon_gol:

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some times I feel some body or some thing bother me

like a pain in my neck

what should I do

when I feel all the people are unreliable

when every things are black

when all my friends leave me

when I feel some love at end of my heart

but I don,t want it

it floating in my body

and make me to tolerate it and some times like it

 

I am waiting for the biggest change in my life

:icon_gol:

Hi Sharook

I found out you study English in advance level, why you chose basic then

you wrote perfectly, I liked it

You are getting improvement

let's do some corrections

 

some times I feel some body or some thing bother me

Sometimes, I feel somebody or something bother me

 

look these words up in your English-English dictionary

Really there is difference between sometimes and some times

 

when every things are black

When everything is black

 

when I feel some love at end of my heart

When I feel some love at bottom of my heart

 

it floating in my body

It is floating in my body

 

and make me to tolerate it and some times like it

and make me to tolerate it and sometimes like it

 

 

:w16:Good JOB

لینک به دیدگاه

Hi Sharook

I found out you study English in advance level, why you chose basic then

you wrote perfectly, I liked it

You are getting improvement

let's do some corrections

 

some times I feel some body or some thing bother me

Sometimes, I feel somebody or something bother me

 

look these words up in your English-English dictionary

Really there is difference between sometimes and some times

 

when every things are black

When everything is black

 

when I feel some love at end of my heart

When I feel some love at bottom of my heart

 

it floating in my body

It is floating in my body

 

and make me to tolerate it and some times like it

and make me to tolerate it and sometimes like it

 

 

:w16:Good JOB

Thanks honey:icon_gol:

 

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